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Its Who You Are. by ~wics:iconwics:



Every time I see your eyes
I see a glimpse of what truly lies;
A spark filled with gifts of thought
All your virtues, and all that you've sought,
From dreams to hopes, every despair
I can see all beneath the surface there.

Do not try to hide your past
Merely embrace it, that's all I ask.
You may think your less than what your worth
Yet you always leave us in such mirth.

Never think you don't deserve my touch
I gave you something that matters much
And this is the future I see for you
Trust me it will ring forever true;

You will be in bliss, and hearts content
For past words I sincerely meant
I also know you will be a star
Simply put, its who you are.
©2009 ~wics
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Author's Comments

Poem which was quite spontaneous.

May you accept who you are and what your past now holds, and believe yourself as brilliant as others around you believe.

And now for something completely different;
GEEBLE, GEEBLE, GEEBLE, GEEBLE, GEEBLE, GEEBLE, GEEBLE, GEEBLE, GEEBLE.

I don't know.

EDIT: A ADDED ENDING AS FUN BUT NOT GOING IN THE ACTUAL THING
"your filled with worth and also valor
Some qualities of the maddest hatter
Aspects of jack skellington too
However i believe the doctor is right for you"

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I enjoyed reading this. Nice work...

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thank you. oh god and i love pirates :D

sad to say though that the man i wrote of in this poem is now my ex-boyfriend.
and although i still wish for friendship, we cannot look past the fact of what i was.
However I am prodding him along, lol some developments have been made.

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A nice flow and a good rhyme scheme to it. It's quite sad to see it is for your ex, but then many move on. A nice, deep piece :-)

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This piece has been featured in: Beautiful Literature of 2009.

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thank you!

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